Trevor Edwards

  • August 26th, 2012 12:54am

    Pro-tip for writers,

    because I’ve been seeing this a lot. 

    To be is the most common of the linking verbs and also the most overused, but all the linking verbs invite generalization and distance. To feel, to seem, to look, to appear, to experience, to express, to show, to demonstrate, to convey, to display – all these suggest in fiction that the character is being acted upon or observed by someone rather than doing something. She felt happy/sad/amused/mortified does not convince us. We want to see her and to infer her emotion for ourselves. He very clearly conveyed his displeasure. It isn’t clear to us. How did he convey it? To whom?

    Most linking verbs have active as well as effectively passive forms, and it is important to distinguish them. She felt sad is effectively passive, but she felt his forehead is an action. If the magician appeared, he is acting; but if he appeared annoyed, then the verb is a linking verb and the only action implied is that of the observer who perceives this. 

    Linking verbs, like the passive voice, can appropriately convey a sense of passivity or helplessness when that is the desired effect. 

    From Writing Fiction: A Guide to Narrative Craft by Janet Burroway


  • August 25th, 2012 2:02pm

    philnoto:

    Big Barda – done for this week’s cosmic theme at the WhatNot Blog -http://whatnotisms.blogspot.com/


  • August 25th, 2012 1:59pm

    Novelists and short-story writers are not under the same obligations as poets to reinforce sense with sound. In prose, on the whole the rhythm is all right if it isn’t clearly wrong.


  • August 25th, 2012 1:19pm

    powergirl:

    cleromancy:

    i really can’t get over how LIEFELD called ANYONE, let alone scott snyder, a “pretentious prick.” this is the guy who said we should regularly fire editors to “remind them of their place.” because his editors wouldn’t let him draw deathstroke with chains. 

    LET ALONE SCOTT SNYDER

    Yeah, it was Lobo and he probably took it out of context. The editor probably said something like “Learn how to draw actual body parts and maybe take a few pouches off and then we can talk about chains”


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